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Reviews For: Whose Lips Are These?

The Reverse Edge Blade
2008-05-27
ch 1,
abuseI loved it! It'll go in my favorites!
The words you used to describe your emotions were so great, one of your best; you're good with descriptions.
I liked the length of it, and the ending. Although it wasn't really an essay, I don't think it matters.
Please write more!
The Reverse Edge Blade
Random-Idiocity
2008-04-30
ch 1,
abuseYou're right, this would make an excellent poem, but non the less it is still very good. Keep it Up!
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