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| SapphireA14 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abusewow! this is amazing, brilliant! well done! |
| Little Fox Girl 2008-05-08 ch 2, | abuseYou should be proud of this story. Yeah, it's a little confusing to someone without any outside knowledge, but I was able to follow it well enough to like it before you added the story notes. The story notes just made things a little clearer! Anyways... Very good short story. |
| Edalene Athene 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseum, makes no sense. is it finished. good though. |
| Alleyes 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abuseThis is a good story, but you need someone to beta it. |