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Reviews For: Blue waters won't lie still

DollyMixRockOutLoud
2008-05-15
ch 1,
abusewow.. i was hoping i could write something sarcastic and mocking, but there is no place for that here. Its fantastic
ticks all round beckers
Ziyi Chan
2008-04-30
ch 1,
abuseI liked this poem.
The last line
"For blue waters to lie still"
really captured everything in your poem.
It brought the whole thing together :)
CitySoar
2008-04-30
ch 1,
abuseI love the rythmic quality of this poem. It makes me think.
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