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| storys 2008-05-09 ch 7, | abuseOH THIS IS SOME AWESOME STORY! Sucks that I didn't discover it earlier, but this is AWESOME. Okay, sorry, lack of vocab. But anyways, I love it and Michael seems 'bloody' hot. Good writing throughout the whole thing! This is exciting :D Update soon! |
| IrishCarBomb 2008-05-08 ch 6, | abuseAnother good chapter, keep em coming. |
| Ferrero Rocher 2008-05-07 ch 6, | abuseHiya there!Me again!This chapter confused the hell outta me!I dunno who called?I dunno what Mike said and it ain't fair!!I mean you not tellin' me!!Hope you'll explain soon enough in the next chapter!!gotta go ciao. |
| IrishCarBomb 2008-05-04 ch 5, | abuseVery dramatic, but it flowed well with the previous chapters, looking forward to the next chapter. Oh, and major thumbsup for Wish You Were Here. :D |
| RomanceDruggie 2008-05-04 ch 5, | abusePLZ HAVE SOME PAYBACK!!Lik eher getting famous,and him realising that he was and is a dipsh%^ who's got some issues.But wouldn't that make it cliched? Oh well as long as Kate gets payback I'm fine(and a man *hint* *hint*) |
| Ferrero Rocher 2008-05-04 ch 5, | abuseHII!!I'm gonna tell you why I don't like him.He's too much of a "I'm your sappy prince charming" you see what I mean?I think Kate should have a guy full of energy who mocks her and more...of an **.See what I mean? Besides, As you may have guessed I love chocholate so very nice flavour you got there!!Keep on updating. |
| IrishCarBomb 2008-05-03 ch 4, | abuseShort, but packed full of wonderfull...ness. As much as you want an answer though, I'm not sure wether she should sing the song or not, cause that sort of dictates how the story will progress from this point. Anyway till next time. *enjoys his cupcake* |
| Ferrero Rocher 2008-05-03 ch 4, | abuseI like your chapter but don't like MIKE too much.Anyways, I think she shouldn't sing the song though.I don't know why. By the way thanks for the cupcakes tastes good! |
| IrishCarBomb 2008-05-03 ch 3, | abuseSo yeah im reading this wonderful lil story about a girl and a bar right, and then I go and check the writers page while I think of a good comment to write, and I see the most ridiculous note about the 4th chapter being done and not posted. So you are now officially not writing to nobody, now post your masterpeice before I become enraged and have my kittens attack you. I'm serious, theyre vicious, they'll um ... gnaw at your toes! >.> |
| Ferrero Rocher 2008-05-02 ch 2, | abuseWell, well... I love IT!It's great but please update it sooner or make it longer!And just wondering...ANOTHER FAVOUR PLEASE?It would be real cool if there were other cute cute guys who flirted with her and she did too etc etc, you see. Um okay... I'm rambling on and on, Sorry.But I love it!Hope she's good at the art thingy!!And by the way, I'm just suggesting some ideas and if you don't wanna use them, it's fine! |
| Holly Twain 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abuseI really like this story so far. I hope you update soon! |
| Ferrero Rocher 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abuseHello!I'm so tired of saying that to each and every single writer.Anyways, I wanted to say that I like your story but since it's got Humor, I think you shouldn't sum up the story like that.You should make it light, that's what gets to people!!And mysterious. And I think that your gal should have a musical talent and should know how to sing very very well, Cause she seems to have an interest for music.PLEASE??!!I WILL LOVE YOU FOREVER!!Please do what I said and Ciao,I'M YOUR FIRST REVIEWER!! |