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| Scarlett Wynter 2008-05-23 ch 1,  | abuseWOW. I love this! It's so beautiful yet tragic at the same time! |
| AK the Twilight 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseThis was a great poem, very well-written, but less constructive and smooth. The lines are very beautifully written, though they don't seem to partake in any real connection to each other. The rhyming was smooth and interesting, and the whole thing was a great read. Great job. |
| Aelfin 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is actually the most beautifully TRAGIC thing i've read in a long time! I was looking for the most effective sentence to quote but... i can't choose. This flows like magic, every single word is actually as it should be. =] Aelfi x |
| script my heart 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseYou are amazing at quatrains (I think that's what they are)! Have you ever tried a sonet? It's a little bit harder, but turns out really sweet! You have the most of a pattern for one! |
| A Distant Planet 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is seriously really good. My favourite bit is the third portion of lines, they're brilliant. Great job! |