I don't really understand... I'll reread it.

*reads it again before contemplating in silence for a minute or two*

Well, first off, I LOVE the last line. The first two lines are very poetic, too. Who are 'they'? I like this: "she feels high / as if she's downed 20 vodkas. Delightful." I still don't understand though. Not that it matters. It's beautiful. :)

great piece. Very good.

Faith

Seemed a little-uh, emo-at the beginning.

Otherwise, blunt. But that's not bad.

-Oreo