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| ode to a nightingale 2008-05-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseI don't really understand... I'll reread it. *reads it again before contemplating in silence for a minute or two* Well, first off, I LOVE the last line. The first two lines are very poetic, too. Who are 'they'? I like this: "she feels high / as if she's downed 20 vodkas. Delightful." I still don't understand though. Not that it matters. It's beautiful. :) |
| Faith Adeline 2008-04-30 ch 1,  | abusegreat piece. Very good. Faith |
| 5 Oreos in 24 hours 2008-04-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseSeemed a little--uh, emo--at the beginning. Otherwise, blunt. But that's not bad. -Oreo |