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| miscellanea 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseThis was beautiful, it put me somewhere else. |
| mizu no kokoro 2008-05-17 ch 1, | abusea very summery image painted. good imagery keep writing |
| Clarelouise 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abusei love the short lines here, very effective :) and i also think the mystrey of the character described is very very good, lets the reader make uop their own mind about her. well done, short but very effective :) |