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| Hikari Ino 2008-06-19 ch 1, | abusegood |
| ThePontificator 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseI loved the stroy! My favorite animal is the fox. Foxes are so cute! If you write any other stories let me know! You are such a good writer. |
| babygyrl 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseYou made Apollo sound like a chick. But other than that, nicely done. |
| Watcher-Annette 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuse“Agreeing moment… gone,” Zeus muttered under his breath. lol i love that :D. Very funny story, it show a different side to the 'gods'. The side which makes them similar to us, they argue :D |
| Hammy Paradise 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseIt might be because I ate drugged muffins, or because I'm having a retard attack, but it seems as if the naration didn't flow. Or rather, didn't *have* flow. It might have been because of the extra info, but I'm not quite sure. Because I'm not in my uhh... normal state of mind, I think. But it was good... yeah. *nods* And it kinda reminds me of that cartoon about hercules(sp?) it was so freakin' mixed up. They had Thor and the goddesses of faith (Skul, Urd, Verdandi, from Nose Myth) in it. And I didn't see any wrongly spelled words. Yeah... |