I almost never leave reviews (because I'm a selfish bastard like that), but as you are my absolute FAVORITE author on all of FictionPress, I felt inclined to do so.

And really to try and nudge you along to finish this story.

All of your stories are brilliant, but this one especially caught my attention. Caught it HARD. Ziggy got me first - quirky little sumbitch! So cute. And of course you just had to make it better.

Peter Pan is my all-time favorite children's book, and definately one of my favorite books. I like that you've taken Peter and made him some schizo kid's imaginary friends, haha - or is Peter imaginary at all in your story? Maybe he's not; I'm intrigued. I'm waiting to find out. *hint hint*

I'm really praying for the day when you finally update this story, because it's just god damn amazing.

So...Pan was an actual person who Daniel thought of as Peter pan? this is mad. But I lvoe your stories. :D

I love this story so much, and it's only four chapters in. It's gorgeous with its oddballed descriptions and figments of imagination. I love reading utter madness; it makes me feel a little more safe, because I don't hallucinate so. (;

Please, update soon?

-Alyssa

I love the imagination in this story. It’s totallylike the sequel to Peter Pan, Peter Pan in Scarlet. The imagination and thoughtfulness totally drew me in. The whole ‘forgive him for forgetting Fun’ and the locks that barred The Way Out amazed me. Wowies.
Woah, that description of glimpses and killing them was so.. *speechless* You got talent, now wield the power! And update.
Dam, you got a great sense of imagine-ness topped with creativity and logically based yet logic defying, see? Hmm. . .. just update.

Is this the end? Poor Daniel, but even if Pan isn't real Daniel is better off with him. If your going to have imaginary friends they may as well make you happy. But then again he can touch Pan, so he might just be real. Or as real as Pan ever gets.

Pan's name makes me think of the one from mythology and if he's even close than Daniel will have pleasant (and pleasurable) evenings for a long time to come.

i loved it. i barely understood some of it. but i loved it.

O_o
wow... that's kinda weird in a really cool way!!

I couldn't help but laugh hysterically at them. Is this me or Pan just admitted of being a pedophile...lol.

update sooN!

I think I can somehow relate to Daniel. Which is probably why I find this story interesting in the first place. I also like how Pan came into the picture the same way he did in his story, but without being too direct and in-your-face [considering how this is slash after all...].

I hope you'll continue and finish writing this story! (:

Ah, this is great! But I'm confused, I can't tell if Pan's real or not! Oh, please update when you have the time!

New reader here!

This story is so... interesting, that I got hooked into reading after a few paragraphs... More plz! :D

It's hard to make the difference between dream, imagination and reality in this story but the more I read the less I think that pan is just another patient of the mental hospital… though maybe? Argh I don't know what to think anymore and wonder if Ziggy isn't to be trusted. But the two boys sure are cute together.

aw yay Daniel's happy ^-^ He deserves that

This is excellent! I love your slightly insane characters, and slightly disturbing content. Slightly disturbing, I do enjoy, though it certainly doesn't rival the minotaur smut I found on nifty in distubidity levels. Which is good. I was too afraid to read the minotaur **. Also, you know, not interested. Um, yeah. Continue this, because it's sweet and odd and interesting and stuff. There's not nearly enough truly original fic about.

i'm really intrigued by your pan. still not grown up, still retaining some childish qualities, but definitely older and more mature in some ways- like making out with boys. he also seems particularly ocompelling to daniel, which is interesting. and poor ziggy's acting like a jealous queen. i'm definitely looking foward to whatever progression there will be in pan and daniel's relationship.

ps- you called daniel 'david' at one point mid-chapter when pan was revealing his super gayness. just fyi. ;)