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| Lindsey Quit Lollygagging 2008-05-29 ch 5, | abuselol, i liked this chapter. and...can i just say i am absolutely in love with Jack. haha, i get to meet him at warped this year. ** yes! |
| LeticiaTokioHotel 2008-05-18 ch 5, | abuseNot exactly how I imagined her meeting with Mason but I'll takje what i get. :) Yea, it wasn't a good chapter but i get it that your in a pissy mood. Lol. |
| superficialSagacity 2008-05-07 ch 3, | abuseOH SORRY!! It all made sense in my head. Um...in your first chapter, it said she was too pale and had dark hair...what does she look like now? :D |
| superficialSagacity 2008-05-07 ch 4, | abusehaha...this is pretty interesting.. What does she look like now? |
| LeticiaTokioHotel 2008-05-07 ch 4, | abuseLol, there clears things up. Why did you stop there! WHY!!?? Haha, i so wanted to read on how Mason reveals himself.. Update soon! great job so far. :) |
| LeticiaTokioHotel 2008-05-03 ch 3, | abuseHi. Alright, you wanted a flame? 1.) Why is the mother cursing? Aren't mothers supposed to set a good example? :b 2.) The story moves on too fast. Alright now the good side of me. 1.) Awesome. two chapters in a day. :) 2.) Update soon! I wanna see how Gabe enters the story. Now both good and bad reviews are equal! Again, update soon! |
| sarahrules336 2008-05-03 ch 2, | abusecute! i like it |
| LeticiaTokioHotel 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseHi. I think this story's great. Fun to read. :) I just hope you will continue it. If you don't, then...?? |