Not bad, especially for something written in such a short amount of time. Only big nitpick: "Mrs. James married her lover prior to the death of her husband." Do you mean "after" instead of "prior"? Because right now, it sounds like she was a bigamist for a short amount of time...

Other than that, though, nice job!

Really intresting. I mean really. Like, space time continum intresting. I'd be cool to see this as a full story maybe...