this is adorable. oh my god, i am in love with this story! :]

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WOW, baby, that was WONDERFUL! I'm so proud...

xoxo

wow! with those amazing descriptions, you can't help but wish you were that girl!

That has got to be the best description of a romanance on this whole site. I feel bittersweet now, because i cant help but fantasize about feeling or thinking such vehement passions. I loved it. And i want it so bad. Haha.

cheers!

I just... wow. You certainly have a way with description, and you've done it well with their kiss. Amazing work. :)