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| luv me like no other 2008-05-24 ch 1,  | abusemakes me think. deep. |
| Shasta Valentine 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abusethis poem is aboslutely and one hundred percent beautiful poetry. you've got an amazing talent, and i encourage you to keep writing more and more. because i know i'll definately be reading it. i hope you get alot of analytical reviews on this one. because i'm just so enraptured with its talent, i dont have the time. great job, obviously. -sv |
| Thoughtful Silence 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseThis was great! The repetition was very well done, the desolate tone was perfectly conveyed and some of the imagery was inspired. One thing to this though, I think the rhyming hinders this poem... like the last line of the fourth stanza was kinda... shaky... and the final line of the poem seemed a bit forced and anti-climactic for such a good piece. Anyways, keep up the good work. -Silence |
| molotovcocktailontherocks 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is very well written, I love the structure, I'm a little unclear on some parts but overall, I like it. Good job! |