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| Annoying as Hell 2008-05-05 ch 1,  | abuseAs emo as this is, I love it. Although "innit" rhymes, it deters from the deep tragic tone of the poem. It still is an incredibly well written poem full of emotion and pain. It is terribly sad to think that you actually might feel this way... |
| Wings of Burning Deception 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseYes, that was a very emo poem. But very well writen. I really liked the rhyming scheme. Even though some of the words you chose didn't really do any justice to the theme of the poem. Like Innit... yeah, that didn't really belong. But still a very good poem, I may favorize this. |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseBeing a Nice guy is awsome. Don't change yourself because you found one of those girls who don't deserve anyone. This poem is very heartfelt. I love it, just b/c i can relate in some matters. Don't give up ^_^ (adding to c2) XKristie MarieX |