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| Shasta Valentine 2008-05-01 ch 1,  | abusethis poem is nothing to apologize for. sure, it could have afforded a bit more poetic structure, but i really like it. i feel like i can feel your emotion, which is one of the main objectives i seek out when i read poetry. excellent job, you translate your feelings very well! -sv |
| Metaphoric Colors 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was amazing. That guy is going to realize someday what he lost. |
| Jasmine Delilah 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseIt doesn't suck, actually I wanted to know if I could use this for my English project? We have to collect 15 poems about abstact words, and one of mine is love/relationships. Would you mind if I used it to analyze?? |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseWhen I reached the middle of this poem I wasnt sure if it was going to end properly. But it ended very well. I'm so sorry to hear!! I can totally relate! I hope your feel better soon. Nice work. Hpe you don't mind me adding it to my C2! XKristie MarieX |