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| autumnsprite 2008-06-29 ch 4,  | abuseWow this story is so unique and addictive, you tell it in a way that is so realistic and well described. I can't wait to read more! this story is stunning |
| A.V.Mackie 2008-06-17 ch 4, | abuseDamn that last bit was really cool! Just plain cool. :D I hope you've got more of this story on the way? |
| teardrop456 2008-05-21 ch 4, anon. | abuseYikes! He just appeared out of nowhere. I hope u explain it soon keep writting -teardrop |
| SouledChampion 2008-05-21 ch 1, | abuseHey, I got your PM, and I'm totally up for beta-reading this story (Sorry I'm replying through here, I checked out your profile and there was no email address or anything I could have used, instead). I feel you should know that for the next... oh, month or so, I'm taking summer classes, so I won't be able to work as fast as I would if I had unlimited free time. However, that's not to say I'll take an age to get back to you - at most, it might take me a week if I have an upcoming test or something like that and the chapter/scene in question is particularly long. After June 24, though, I'm pretty much all yours until the end of August, so if you're cool with all of that, just let me know and we can start whenever you'd like =) |
| nomdeplume311 2008-05-21 ch 4, | abuseLove it! |
| Ellieloo la Grimm 2008-05-21 ch 4, | abuseGreat Chapter. I liked the dream, very creative :) Also this new guy... Ugh! he gives me the creepies. |
| Artemis the Brave 2008-05-21 ch 4, | abuseDee-lightful! Can't wait for the next installment. |
| teardrop456 2008-05-12 ch 3, anon. | abusehey great story! post more soon please (silver eyes... yummy :P) ps on chapter 1, your second posting, at one poitn you call Edgar Edward... I think it's when Ekki is looking at herself in the mirror. Just thought you should know -teardrop |
| Ellieloo la Grimm 2008-05-12 ch 3, | abuseWow I really love your story. A lot. The idea is origional and you have a nice writing style. Please update soon! |
| A.V.Mackie 2008-05-12 ch 3, | abuseThat chappy was brilliant! Aw man, I am soo into your story now, keep this up and you'll have loads of readers. :D |
| A.V.Mackie 2008-05-12 ch 2, | abuseThis story has had a really good start and I'm quite interested now. I like all the characters so far and Ekki sounds groovy. Oh and I like the new title I think it's better than "Lost in Time", "Lodestone" is a very good title for the description of the story, good stuff. |
| Jaeiyola 2008-05-12 ch 3, | abuseAh! So wonderful. Now, I really can't wait to find out what happens next. The dialogue is smooth and everything flows together nicely. I love it, seriously. |
| Artemis the Brave 2008-05-12 ch 3, | abuseWow. Very original, it's like Hitchhiker's Galaxy meets romance, meets urban fantasy. I love it! I can't wait to see what happens next and if Ekki meets him or has a mental breakdown. I look forward to either. |
| nomdeplume311 2008-05-12 ch 3, | abuseOh I really, really like this story so far. Especially this 3rd chapter. Looking forward to more!! |
| teardrop 2008-05-10 ch 1, anon. | abusegreat start! Please keep writting! |