No matter how much I loved this story (GORRY! :D) I just couldn't get over these facts...

1: Elizibeth Bathery vas born in ze 1500's
2: Elizibeth vas not Hungarian, she vas born in Romania...

Sorry, but I just can't get over that. BUT I DID LOVE YOUR STORY! IT VAS AWESOME! (funny spelling rocks!!)

I really like this one, and the creepy-ness of it. It's great. xD

straight from the review marathon! (link on my profile page)

wow, i think elizabeth is scarier than hitler. O.o

i thought the piece was well written - you definitely captured the cruelty of both of these people. it was grotesque and kind of... well... just creepy, but it was nicely written. XD

you also did a good job showing both of their feelings... how killing and bloodshed was light and fun to them. it was a really eerie tone. :) fitting for the piece.

i thought the last scene where they both confessed their love could have been a bit slower... maybe put in a bit of description of the setting or something.

also, why did she bite him? O.o? that confused me a bit.

"He could hardly breath[e]" - i think that's how it is.

anyway, good job. keep writing! :)

-Lefty

A cool idea, and very well-executed. It was funny and weird all at the same time. Did you mean for it to be humorous? Because, to me, it was.

Whoa... it was sort of grotesque and weird, but at the same time... sort of funny. in the way that a kill bill movie is funny. don't know if you were going for that, but yeah. good piece!