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R4nt 2008-11-05 . chapter 1
Nearly surreal. Damn good. As with everyone, I loved the snowflakes.
Harmonic Discord 2008-06-15 . chapter 1
I absolutely loved the imagery of this piece - beautiful! Your word choice is gorgeous. I liked how you create the picture of snowflakes suspended by string - such an awesome image!

My one criticism relates to the last line (“To forget everything is to escape the impossible.”) - it didn't make sense to me. I'm not sure whether this is just me though...

Other than that, wonderful job, and a pleasure to read.

-- Harmonic Discord from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
angeloftheninthorder 2008-05-01 . chapter 1
That was marvelous. The words leaked out such raw emotion and a passionate display. Definitely a favorite.
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