Reviews for Who Will Save Me?

Katsaya 2008-06-24 ch 1,	abuseAnother great poem, I really liked it:)
Starfire17 2008-05-27 ch 1,	abuseNice and simple. Contrary to the first half the last line makes it more entertaining than anything.
addicted2storiz 2008-05-10 ch 1,	abuseDefinite angst, though I've got no probs with that. And I'm glad that I made you feel that way :D I definitely had the same feeling when I got reviews (not that I want you to give me any; what little I posted isn't all that great). That ghost playground poem especially showed your skill and when I was thinking about it afterward, I realized that it was similar to some poems I'd read for my AP Lit class... This one was indeed short and sweet; I loved the fun rhymes. And cynicsm rocks
MyWorldisBlack 2008-05-10 ch 1,	abuseI think it works well! The shortness sort of shows how blunt reality can be
Shasta Valentine 2008-05-01 ch 1,	abusegood job on keeping it short and sweet. but is twit a word? good job anyway. -sv
Metaphoric Colors 2008-05-01 ch 1,	abuseWow, I REALLY liked that.
East-0f-Eden 2008-05-01 ch 1,	abusea bruatal realization of reality I like it.