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| doctor's diagnosis 2008-05-21 ch 1,  | abusei love that. it's these little things that us girls find perfect. sigh. |
| Thermite 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseThe man has honor, that much I can tell. The more you tell me about him, the more I find myself thinking "good choice!" Awesome poem by the way, short, sweet and to the point. Thermite |
| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseTry the second to last line without the "for him." It might work better... but I don't know actually. -stix- |