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| mia5081 2008-06-30 ch 6,  | abuseOh, really interesting chapter. I want to meet this Devon dude :D Update soon! ~Mia |
| MCakaWriterGirl 2008-06-30 ch 6, | abuseI really like your story, because it mixes so many fantasy things together in a wholle different way. i ask everyone this who is aundrey going to end up with. do you know who she is going to end up with. i also want to know when she finds out that seb and gen are vampires. |
| Silly-girl15 2008-06-29 ch 6, | abusegood chap. |
| Evil Angel of DOOM 2008-06-29 ch 6, | abuse1) I LOVE Alanis Morissete 2) An arranged engagment(sp)? Nifty! Adds drama. 3) I loved that you gave her a little heart, it really adds to her character. 4) I LOVE THE STORY CONTINUE BEING FABULOUS! :D |
| Selene Ice Queen 2008-06-28 ch 6, | abuseSo sry I havent been reviewing. I kinda been busy with my own story that im re writing and skool. But N . E ways, the story is Fantabulous! I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it going woman! :D Selene |
| Claudia 2008-06-27 ch 6, anon. | abuseWow this is a cool story! Keep it up! Update Please! I like Sebastian! He's cool! Then again i usually prefer the vampire over the werewolf anyway. Oh well. Update Please! |
| N.M.B. 2008-06-24 ch 5, | abuseOh, Gen getting suspicious. Sorry bout not reviewing earlier, I haven't been able to get on for awhile. |
| 0tomorrow0 2008-06-20 ch 5, | abuseAck, sorry I haven't been reading.. too busy.. and lazy... haha, but i'm bettah now. ANYWAY. Great job, this is turning out really well. I like the distinctions between different species, and the... idk.. individualness-ish (is that a word?) of each person. So yeah, keep writing~~ ~~ 안녕! |
| Silly-girl15 2008-06-18 ch 5, | abusegood chap! |
| mia5081 2008-06-18 ch 5, | abuseHaha, Audrey and Adam have absolutely no idea what they just let out. I liked Gen in this chapter :D Update soon! ~Mia |
| Evil Angel of DOOM 2008-06-17 ch 5, | abuse...ah, when worlds collide. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| mia5081 2008-06-12 ch 4, | abuseVery interesting chapter...I can't tell if I like Audrey still, but I definitely like Joey lol. Update soon! ~Mia |
| Evil Angel of DOOM 2008-06-09 ch 4, | abuse"Sounds like bitches..." XD I love! Pretty please update as soon as you can! |
| Evil Angel of DOOM 2008-06-09 ch 2, | abuseI don't normally read supernatural stuff- with the exception of ghosts- but this drew me in. And I have to say, I love the storyline so far. It's really different and interesting, I hope you update as soon as you can! :D |
| Ice Diva - tude 2008-06-09 ch 4, | abuseI luv yer story! She is such a Wee - yotch! I like the way she calls them dog. Keep up the grest work! :D Ice Diva XOXO |