boys has 4 letters!

I like adore this story!

Hm... To me, that wasnt the feelings of a girl who is insecure.

I'm sorry. It's just not quite there.

On that front.

And too skinny!

God!

That's ridiculous!

Models have no boobs and butts. Chances are I would kill for the body you describe Rori to have.

Yeah... Other than that. Really well written :)

It's moving!

Ah... The cabbage has life!

(I was talking about me, btw. Hehe)

I get what it was on about now. Though, something really major happened to Rori, right? Yeah. I think it must have. I like your little chapters, theres something quite sucsquenced (Yeah... Didnt spell it right) about them :D

Really good!

Ending confused me.

'Cause I'm stupid like that.

But there you go.

Good second chapter. Though, maybe you should have added in the tight feeling people get in their stomachs when they skip school.

No. I didnt think it was boring!

I quite liked it. It did set the scene very well, and has already added this hint of mysteriousness to the character! Which is great!

Love your storyy!

/bookmarked to finish later

"Zits on Tits: make Chest acne a thing of the past!" hahah i could actually see an add for that!

and then Aurora.. I HEART sleeping beauty!

Great chapter Katie and Mel! Loved it! They r so cute! Update soon!

Oops, my bad! It was this chapter that I was confused about.

The one with Kaci, Mason, and Sienna. It kinda shook me up when these new people came into the story :P but i like them :) 'specially the purple hippo part and when she peed in his truck lol. Funny stuff.

Keep up the good work!

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Haha, well since you asked for a review, HERE YOU GO! :)

So far, I am really getting into this story. I'm starting to get a good feel for the characters and everything, although I don't feel I know Adam that well (but I still love him ALOT:)

Also, that whole other story part confused the crap outta me lol. Are they coming back? You know, the whole woman with twins and protective big brother, text break up thingy? I kinda want more from them...just a little more warning k?

OMG, I L-O-V-E, LOVE Sophie! Is she coming back? She's adorable! Or...y'no sounds adorable limm (laughing in my mind:)

Most times I don't like reading stories with girls named 'Bella' in it since Twilight, but either I'm getting over that or your writing is really good and it's distracting me...I think it's the latter ;)

LONG ENOUGH FOR YA! lmbo

My reviews won't always be this long. Its just that this was the first one...blah blah blah cheese & crackers...

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Oh my god!

I love it, its a super story.

Please write more,

Kayla Brown

Update! Or I'll Send the voultri after you!

Please? For Edward?

Aw you had to stop there? Update! Very good! And btw British accents are extremely sexy! Hope you feel better mel!