Reviews for Ain't No Love Without II

SEMMU 2008-05-05 ch 4,	abuseI absolutely love the imagery of the last stanza. You're no rookie, are ya? Here's the goods, in case you've forgotten. "But no one ever sells insurance plans For things ephemeral as love and lust They’re just fleeting images outside that Little cubicle time’s circumscribed us" Definetely worth adding to favorites. When I have time, I'll read every word you've shared on fictionpress. Great job. Write on!
SEMMU 2008-05-05 ch 2,	abuseAnother great write. Awesome job. I love the last two lines and the bits of alliteration. My favorite: "it’s such a drag since we’ve seen goats fucking brazenly beneath King Stephen’s statue" Write on!
SEMMU 2008-05-05 ch 1,	abuseAwesome! You're talented. Anyways, should there be an "a" in the last line or am I missing something?