I like this. My favorite part in the "folded memories." Such a great description.

it's really heartfelt. i like how you wrote it at an actual bus stop. i should have thought of that! i like the sentiment.

how shakespearean. i like it though especially how you used his language in the end.

i love the imagery and how you recycled some of my ideas and made them your own. it's really interesting how people response to poems. it is stunning, per usual.

"Which made me pause reflexive about life."... I felt like there should either be a comma after pause or that it should be reflexively

Your phrasing and word choices are really great here. They depict the scene well.

I really like the way you describe the dance it's different which makes the whole dance as a metaphor for love not cliched, which is good since a lot of times it is.

I really like the word choices here with multiplicity and reticence. Very powerful words.

This made me laugh...the last 4 lines.
And all us women want is to be totally worshiped! (Tongue in cheek)

So true!

I really like this piece because the simile is really great. I love how you did it throughout the whole piece. It's definitely something I haven't read or thought of before, but it fits so well. Great job.

i like how you took elements of my poem and incorporated it into yours. the imagery is beautiful. the metaphor is interesting.

I like your word choices... and the title. It's nice.

Interesting piece. A bit confusing, but I liked it.

The capitalization was a bit odd you did lowercase in the beginning and then started all lines with capitals. I did like the piece though, your descriptions were nice.

I like the dance thing in the beginning, it's different. I also like the rhyming, it worked nice.