Reviews for My Eighteenth Birthday Present

Silenced Soul And Alter Ego 2008-05-10 ch 1,	abuseGranted, I didn't read the whole thing (yes, you may shout at me and throw a tantrum for moi being such a horrible reader for not even reading the whole of it). But there's a good reason on why I didn't. It didn't catch my attention. You should spice up the second paragraph, in my most honest opinion. But of course, one person can never really change someone else's mind without persistence. All in all, it's quite the ironic. A happy birthday is the death day of another. It's really quite lovely though. Signing out, Silenced P.S. One last thing, it isn't much of an essay, come to think of it, more like a very short story.
Peanuts Factory 2008-05-05 ch 1,	abuseWell - written. I had an accident when I was 19 years old too. Yes, do not be too confident... It could hurt you. Keep writing! :)
ivorydog 2008-05-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseExtremely well written, and a cautionary tale for all new drivers. I only noticed one missing comma, in the first paragraph.