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| LondonLi 2008-05-17 ch 10,  | abuseGreat job this chapter. I love all the characters, and especially the sections containing Ricky and Melanie. Yeah for the sappiness! Thanks again for continuing this great story. |
| realangel99 2008-05-16 ch 9, | abuseI feel sorry for Carlos and I hope nothing bad happens to him but that Ricardo realises he is ignoring his son.I find the evolving relationship between George and Jelena really cute. |
| rosette2299 2008-05-14 ch 8, | abuseI liked this chapter and I get where Maria is coming form because it is still kind of weird to know your parents had a life before you and you wonder how they got together.I love the Melanie and Ricardo scene even if it was short. |
| rosette2299 2008-05-12 ch 7, | abuseI think it is so cute how flustered George got when he realised that Jelena had changed so much. |
| rosette2299 2008-05-10 ch 6, | abuseI enjoyed Melanie and Ricardo's scene and I hope George starts to see Jelena in a new light. |
| siddika 2008-05-09 ch 5, | abuseI love Jelena and hopes she and George gets together. |
| rosette2299 2008-05-07 ch 4, | abuseThis is going really good and I love that we are now getting Ricardo's perspective on Melanie and their relationship.I like George and the kids but I must admit I look forward most to the scenes with Ricardo and Melanie. |
| XMizzFeFeX 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abusei have just read two of your stories and you are a really great writer, i dont know why you dont get more reviews your work is great. my only suggestion for you is that for the stories that have sex in it you should mark them for mature just in case, i meen i am 14 and i just happen to stumble upon some and yeah, you probably dont want some 10 or 12 year old who thinks their old enough to read teenage stuff to read all that, Just a suggestion. great stories though. |
| LondonLi 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseThanks so much for deciding to give us a sequel. I love how Melanie and Ricky are still getting along! |
| Cory D Hart 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseGood start! |