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| XxHeartXcorexX 2008-08-20 ch 12,  | abuseAw! Yah, Mack's walls are coming down now! Dude, im so teling my friends about this story, it's so kick...a three letter word I'd rather not type on this site, if ya catch my drift. Anyways, I think im liking this new direction. Keep it up, rockstar! -Spaz |
| bmwmusicgirl 2008-08-16 ch 12, | abuseThis story is so amazing. I really enjoy reading it everytime you update. Good job. Oh, and thanks for clearing up the Mack's room thing, I realized that you had said her room was in the basement, but then she went upstairs...I had been wondering about that. Ok, I'm done talking now. =) |
| monkeytoesie 2008-08-15 ch 6, | abuseOkay, before I say anything else, let me just tell you that this is an AMAZING story!! I am in love with it. Thanks so much for suggesting that I read it... gah! I'm totally falling for Aiden.. who unfortunately is a fictional character! I suppose that I'll just have to let Mack get together with him, yeah? Anyways, the reason I'm reviewing now is because.. alas, I've got to go. I'll be sure to read the rest later though, because this is so good! One little thing, it said that she went upstairs to her room? I thought that she was moved to the basement. Anywho, again, great job! I love love love it! I'll be back! ♫ ♥ ♫ |
| bmwmusicgirl 2008-08-14 ch 11, | abuseI've been waiting for this update, I love the way this story is going!and the juicy news about Aiden...lol. Keep up the good work! I'll be waiting! |
| CeruleanStarGlow 2008-08-05 ch 10, anon. | abuseI really love this so far! Its a really interesting fic and i cant wait to hear more! |
| bmwmusicgirl 2008-08-04 ch 9, | abuseAMAZING! I love this story! I love the music aspect, and you've done an amazing job creating interesting and unique characters. A few errors here and there! But otherwise truly amazing! Good Job. I can't wait to read more! |
| Always Pencil 2008-07-10 ch 1, | abuseI like it. I'll keep reading it. |
| XxemoXsideXprojectxX 2008-07-07 ch 7, anon. | abusePLEASE update soon! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! your two stories are two of the uncommon good ones! been waiting for what feels like months... but PlEaSe update soon!1 |
| Comic Suicide 2008-05-26 ch 7, | abusei love it continue! :) |
| Comic Suicide 2008-05-23 ch 6, | abuseIt's annoying that she hates him so much for no reason, yeah he's annoying but he just wants to get to know her. I really like this story though. Continue please. |
| symbiotic 2008-05-15 ch 5, | abuseGreat chapter. The fact that metal was mentioned is awesome! That really is truly awesome. Great job. There are five bands you must mention. 1. Megadeth 2. Metallica 3. Anthrax 4. Slayer 5. Iron Maiden I can go on and on if you want me to, but I'm not going to leave you a huge review. Once again, great chapter and I hope to see more soon. |
| nip77 2008-05-07 ch 4, | abuseOnce again, amazing job. Aiden's character is someone who I can love and hate at the same time (but mostly love). Mack seems to be warming up to him...hehe. I must say Aiden playing during lunch made my heart melt. Update Soon! -nip77 |
| XkillerXburritosX 2008-05-06 ch 3, | abusethis story is really good so far. i'm really interested to read and find out what might happen next! keep up the good work! |
| Death Hairbrush 2008-05-06 ch 2, | abuseTeehee. I like Mack. ^-^ I really like the description you use! It makes me feel like I'm there, with oh-so-smexy guitar guy...haha. Thank you for reviewing my story. =] |
| nip77 2008-05-04 ch 2, | abuseWow, this is really good. I love Mack's character and Aiden's attitude. Update soon, and I'll be sure to read! ~nip77 |