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| Stormie 2008-06-01 ch 2, anon. | abuseStormie...is voting. All hail. And rain. And snow. And I'm sleep deprived, how could you tell? Best: Myriad Originality: Chiomi and Myriad Mechanics: Blackcat Fantastic stories, you lot! |
| MatthewPaul 2008-05-31 ch 2,  | abuseOrig: Myriad Mech: Chiomi Best: Myriad |
| PandaKnight 2008-05-31 ch 4, anon. | abuseM... they were all awesome, and I had time to give better readthroughs than I normally do (with about a third of the usual submission count), but here's the verdict: Mechanics: BlackCat Originality: Chiomi Best: Myriad |
| Jane Ellecot 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseOriginallity: BlackCat Mechanics: Chiomi Best: Myriad ~Jane |
| Myriadragon 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseNot much to choose from this month, but: Mech--BlackCat Orig--Chiomi Best--Chiomi |
| Myriadragon 2008-05-30 ch 2, | abuseIt's better lengthened, though it still needs to be longer. And I still love the ending. |
| Fenrir 2008-05-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseMechanics: Chiomi Originality: BlackCat Best: Myriad |
| Washi Chiisai 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseRatings! :) Originality: Myriad Mechanics: Chiomi Best: Myriad |
| Motoko 2008-05-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseBest: Myriad Originality: Chiomi Mechanics: BlackCat |
| ImagineMe 2008-05-26 ch 4, | abuseI loved all three stories and here are my votes :) Originality: BlackCat Mechanics: Chiomi Best: Myriad |
| Lenari Soto 2008-05-26 ch 4, | abuseI like your narrator's voice quite a bit; it's got character. I'm also very interested in seeing where you go with this series. Voting time! Originality: this one's a toughie, as we had two pretty similar general concepts going on, but Myriad's won me over. Mechanics: Chiomi Best: Myriad |
| Lenari Soto 2008-05-26 ch 3, | abuseLOVE. SO MUCH LOVE. I'm also amused that Avery/Avim's sister is named Rhian, as I'm planning on naming my daughter Rihan. :D Basically? I cannot wait for the next installment. Amazing job as always! |
| Lenari Soto 2008-05-26 ch 2, | abuse...just the fact that it's called the Tower of Truth, Justice, and Spandex makes my life! And I very much like the interaction between Sabrina and Taranis. Basically? I love this. I don't even have enough brain power to say anything else atm. ;) |
| watchdog 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseI just read the submitions for C-35 and here are my votes. It was hard to chose but these are the ones that spoke to me. Mechanics- Being Tied to a Bed Isn’t All Bad When You’ve Got Your Own Personal Knight-in-Shining-Armour By: BlackCat. From a technical standpoint this story was the one that I in my limited literary knowlege thought was the best put together. This story would have been the best overall if not for the main chaercter "Maddy". I think that Maddy is a male, but he reads like a female and that can be a little confusing at times. I beleive this to be a qurk of the chaercter and not the story itself. Originalty- The Kalani (I) By Myriad. I was very impresed with the whole new world that was invented for this story and the seemless way it was intergrated into the modern world. I would like to read more and see where it goes. Best Read- Again The Kalani (I) by Myriad. The story just flowed from one point to the next and I could not stop. I had to know what hapens next. A real page turner. I can only hope to be this good one day. |
| henred5 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuse—Mechanics: The Kalani (I) By Myriad —Originality: Tower Stories Part Two: Sabrina and Taranis By Chiomi —Best: The Kalani (I) By Myriad |