Interesting piece, but non the less it was still very good. Keep it Up!

Interesting. Sort of staccato. I really liked, "break/just/b-r-e-a-k/everything/everyone" because it really showed off the disjointed feeling. Also I thought that the "b-r-e-a-k" sounding really good if you are signifying a sort of longness of the word, like stretching it out and emphasizing each syllable. Or perhaps you were spelling it out. I like the first one better, but both works. Anyway, good job.