Reviews for Beautiful Awakening

Tranquil Thorns 2008-05-28 ch 1,	abuse'Awakens sweet serenity' - I think this should be 'awaken', since your mention 'lies' in the previous line, which is plural. Unless I'm mistaken. =P I really like the rhyme scheme you have here. This poem reminded me of a twisted lullaby for some reason. Either that, or a fairytale in which a sad princess sings this. Very lovely!
R. Douglas 2008-05-17 ch 1,	abuseAmazing, simply amazing. I rather like the lines 'Fire breathing life in me, Crying back the symphony.' Very well done, keep up the great work and thank you for all the reviews.
AK the Twilight 2008-05-13 ch 1,	abuseYou nailed the imagery very well; just be careful with using repetitive rhymes. Though you did it rather well, it got just a bit repetitive near the end. Unrequited love, eh? That's an interesting concept worth investigating. Good job.
Ashelin 2008-05-02 ch 1,	abuseThis reminds me of old poetry with old words, but that's not a bad thing. Not old like rotted or decayed or used up, but old like beautiful and timeless and interesting. I really enjoyed this actually. "Fools will fall in love with love," I especially liked that. It made me smile, because so many of us are truly fools. At least I am. Good job.