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| AK the Twilight 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseNow this is a great piece of verse. Experimenting with the lines was a great idea and the whole atmosphere felt real and heartfelt. You captured the moment extremely well and the supernatural aspects don't feel overdone or ridiculously fantastic. This is probably one of your best poems I've seen and is definitely worth reading again. Excellent job. |
| McKinley Cooper 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseIt hurts. It's tormenting and beatiful. Perfect poetic prescription, Isca. To you, Mckinley |
| Wolf Wonderer 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseA little too detailed for my taste, but I think I know good work when I see it. Good job! |
| LilMissNoBodysAngel 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was really powerful |
| Ghostly Shadow 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is so beautiful and it floats perfectly. I can actually feel the characters’ sentiments. It’s penetrating. Lovely story. Take care and good luck! |
| Miss Dagny Taggart 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseI like this - it flows like poetry. :D |