"Scratched up plastic tape is holding my heart together." That, I can tell, came straight from your heart. This was sad, but beautiful!

I really liked this. I could feel the pain and the sadness. and beautiful imagery. I love it. Keep up the good work

This is beautiful. Sad, but beautiful. I love the stanza The ink on the cardboard/dried a lifetime ago/in a year I barely remember,/except for the hollow, dead grating/of autumn leaves skittering across/empty concrete sidewalks. I can almost hear the sound od the leaves. Great job!

I loved this! I could feel the pain, and you did a great job with the theme. I was listening to some classical music from Pride and Prejudice; it was perfect. _

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