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| Isca 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuse"Scratched up plastic tape is holding my heart together." That, I can tell, came straight from your heart. This was sad, but beautiful! |
| Morgan Duriya 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this. I could feel the pain and the sadness. and beautiful imagery. I love it. Keep up the good work |
| Kaleidoscope23 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful. Sad, but beautiful. I love the stanza The ink on the cardboard/dried a lifetime ago/in a year I barely remember,/except for the hollow, dead grating/of autumn leaves skittering across/empty concrete sidewalks. I can almost hear the sound od the leaves. Great job! |
| SweetSin 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseI loved this! I could feel the pain, and you did a great job with the theme. I was listening to some classical music from Pride and Prejudice; it was perfect. ^_^ /watch?v=Tv-Z8YCo5W4 |