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| rainbabie 2008-07-26 ch 13, | abuseLOL, you made sure to add the cheesecake to make it a perfect date! Thanks for another great chapter.. Can't wait for your next :) |
| midnightbeauty 2008-07-26 ch 13, | abuseGahh >.< Holy apples I love Brian! Too cute! Omg... your story is gonna turn me into a rabid fangirl O.O Sorry it took a while for me to review I've been up to my forehead in random business -_-' But, anywho, I've been meaning to check out Welcome to the Funhouse, so I'm thinking I'll do that soon |
| gulistanlik 2008-07-26 ch 13, | abuseOh wowies! They kissed! =D Are my eyes playing tricks on me? I don't think my eyes are THAT bad. What do you think? =D Yeah I'm in *SQUEE*age mode at the moment- I can't help it! =D gulistanlik |
| auburnfusion 2008-07-26 ch 13, | abuseHOLY MOFO YOU FINALLY DID IT! I have to admit, I really, really, liked the ending, with the whole, "I forgot something" bit. Really classic and cliche, but it fit right in so beautifully. I really hope you'll explore Elvis and Maggie's mom's relationship a bit more; it would contribute to showing Maggie that despite several failures, her mom can achieve happiness. That in itself would contribute so beautifully to the plot as well. Now, I'm definitely curious to see if Maggie will ask Brian out, because I really want to see that guy's reaction. Poor kid, he'll think he's died and gone to heaven. Good luck with the rest of your classes. Enjoy the rest of your summer and the three weeks of literacy freedom. I know you'll utilize it so well! Take care! XD |
| A.K.A. Writer's Block 2008-07-26 ch 13, | abuseWow. Life-making review? I don't think I'll ever be able to live up to that, but I gotta at least try. Okay, so Brian Deacon is pretty much the sweetest boy ALIVE. So he's sweet and he's apparently quite attractive. I say that it's about time Maggie started to fall for him. I mean, if I went to that school I'm fairly sure I would be mildly in love with him. Or extremely. I guess it would depend on, y'know, Maggie. Maggie's mom reminds me of the mom in John Tucker Must Die, but I think that's just cause she serial dates slimeballs. And because I watched that movie last night. Well, I've got to go eat (I woke up three hours ago and it's now past noon and believe me when I say that I'm starving) or I might pass out on my computer and this review will never be... uh, submitted (hello small, perwinkle-grey button, how are you today?). And I dunno. Maybe eating will fuel the normalcy atoms in my brain and the next review you get will be normal-er. And not odd and insane and rambling. But anyway: this is one of my favourite stories, absolutely NO doubt about that, I absotively cannot wait for more, I adore your writing and your character, your story rocks harder than pop rocks, and I will go read the Welcome to the Funhouse story FOR SURE! Lurve, Isabel |
| righthere431 2008-07-26 ch 13, | abuse=] that was so adorable |
| I Quoth Nevermore 2008-07-26 ch 13, | abuseThe kiss was superb! I loved it. And I wouldn't mind if this becomes a two part series. I would read it anyway. I can't wait till the next chapter. Update soon! |
| GoldenStarryNight 2008-07-26 ch 13, | abusea 2-part series sounds good! i dont know what youve got planned after brian and maggie get together (at least, i hope thats whats happening now, judging from that kiss. hehe) but i definitely want more brian and maggie! the kiss was adorable. the cliched rock on the bedroom window that we ALL wish for haha. great job. and im getting the feeling that nora and levi have a history...i hope it doesnt get in the way of their kids' romance too much! |
| Jainblu 2008-07-26 ch 13, | abuseOff? Off! Nuh uh.. you can't even insinuate that there was anything off about this chapter. Seriously ^_^ I loved it. It was flippi'n unbelievably well written, and had really great timing. The kiss came right at the right time :) Well done. =] Also house of fun? I didn't see that.. hmm I'm gonna toddle along there now... see ya take care =] xx |
| kardula 2008-07-26 ch 13, | abusei loved it ! |
| MackayFire 2008-07-26 ch 13, | abuseaw. Lucky Maggie! Not much else to add considering I'm a pile of happy goo. I know what it's like with classes so anything is wonderful and this is beyond that! |
| Bellaria 2008-07-26 ch 13, | abuseheya well loved it, was very good. sorry everytime i see the name Elvis i seem to snicker. it's just such a classic. and yah!! they finally kissed, awesomely done!! Muchly loved and adored. Da boch ~Bellaria |
| Dream.of.Forever 2008-07-26 ch 13, | abuseAwesome, just...awesome! I enjoyed this chapter way too much Your writing is amazing! I can't wait for further chapters. Update soon!! |
| argentine.kid 2008-07-26 ch 13, | abuseahh! it was perfect! just perfect amazing as always |
| friend 49 2008-07-25 ch 13, | abuseah I'm so sosososo sorry I'm not doing a review as I read, but I was reading so fast and I was so excited it was just impossible! Anyways, I loveloveloved this chapter, and Brian is just so amazing and so cute. (: Oh, and I loved the honking. That was cute. I just can't get over this story! Eek. Byebye. Oh, and I PINKY PROMISE that I'll leave a in-depth review next time. (: |