Your story is hilarious! Please update :)

hey! she finally broke up with Ben! your writing style is different and i really like it.

update soon!

This is adorable :) I love Angelica's point of view and her sarcasm is hilarious. And I love Phoebe and Colton, too.

Please update soon!

this story is really good and funny and i can't wait for the next chapter

hey! the chapter was...how do i say...interesting actually...the convos are good but more thought would help. it's like i didn't even come to know when the chapter ended - i mean, it shouldn't be slow but...i think i am rambling now.

update soon!

i really like this story please update soon :)

Seemed interesting so far. Update soon!

it seems interesting. update!

I find this story very interesting so far. The whole beginning setting is enough to keep me reading and the plot sounds well thought out. Also, your grammar is also practically flawless. I hope to see more of this story soon.

Ah. :D I really like this. Even though it's only the first chapter, all of your characters have managed to be really unique. And you write very intelligently. I am impressed. :D I'll be looking for updates.

Sally :D