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| Mary's.Song 2008-05-13 ch 2,  | abusei LOVE it! i hope shawn doesn't flip. update soon! |
| Roman C Lee 2008-05-10 ch 2, | abuseWell this is sorta a cliffhanger, but with a story you like, every chapter ending is a cliffhanger! Wow, he is really having a tough time getting over that one chick, it's crazy how dependant he'd become on her, but I don't think he ever really loved her. Cared about her, but not loved her. But, one too many shots and a stumble up the stairs and that's all out the window! lol, this version is a lot better than your other one, because it's better written, and his actions make a lot more sence. Thank you for updating so fast! UPDATE SOON! |
| Moonlight Hidden Shadow 2008-05-10 ch 2, | abuseAwsome chapter, cant wait for the next. |
| Jayjack 2008-05-09 ch 2, | abuseit's good so far. update when possible please? :D |
| insanity-ward 2008-05-09 ch 2, | abuseomg! Lmao! wicked awesome chapter! luved it! can't wait to see what happens when they wake up still in position! Lmao! anywayz, PLZ UPDATE SOON! =] |
| Betrayed and Broken 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abusekeep writing. Interesting beginning. Makes me wonder what's gonna happen next.ugh i have waiting for the next chapter. |
| Simply Put 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseAww that's sweet. My best friend and I still hold hands...sometimes lol. I'm glad they broke up hehe. Update soon! |
| Roman C Lee 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseYAY! This is awesome! Oh, PLEASE update soon! This is so much better than your other version! I can't wait to read more! ^-^ I'm glad Cloe isn't so much of a ** pushover, and Shawn isn't a playboy for a weird reason ^-^ I had a friend with a girlfriend like his, or ex now I guess, and she was always in his face like that about stupid little misconceptions. I don't remember how they broke it off, but the inevitable did happen. You just can't have a relationship with someone crazy obsessive and territorial like that; you need to be able to be your own person AWAY from them ^-^ That's why I'm very glad it's over between Shawn and Helen; she's a **! lol, UPDATE SOON! |
| insanity-ward 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abusewicked awesome chapter! luved it! PLZ UPDATE SOON! =] |
| fantasy4luvr 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abusehmm that's a pretty good first chapter there i like it lol keep up the good work update soon pls |
| Moonlight Hidden Shadow 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseThat was awsome, I cany wait till you update. |
| cyanidecandy 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abusewow love the updated version :) but i liked the name cain a lot !! can't wait for the next chaptter. |