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Aww, what happened to all your pretty stories? Oh, well...You have good poetry to. This poem was on a very strong topic and I think you kept the tone of it very well. I also loved how you repeated certain lines to drive home the message. Great job there!

The only thing I might suggest is that you put your poem into stanzas, that way it's easier of me (and others) to read. Just work on it a bit, I know you can easily fix it :)

Congrats on a great poem!

pretty heart-felt, i think. i like it!