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| three.steps 2008-06-20 ch 1, | abuseI had to read it, because of the title, but what else would you expect from me :P I can't say enough great things about your poetry Sherry, you're so talented. Great stuff. I love the imagery you create. |
| she smolders 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseI'd like to learn how to make my words feel as colourful and rich as your's does. The twist at the end was bittersweet - honey is sweet and cloying but the last line suggests oh so much more. Take care. |
| Tranquil Thorns 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseVery lovely. I really like the French. It seems to give the poem an almost exotic feeling. That probably sounds very stupid, but I don't know any other way to word it. =P Just one thing. For 'complied moments into scenes', did you mean 'compiled', or is that something I just didn't understand? As always, wonderful work. Keep writing! (: |