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three.steps
2008-06-20
ch 1,
abuseI had to read it, because of the title, but what else would you expect from me :P I can't say enough great things about your poetry Sherry, you're so talented. Great stuff. I love the imagery you create.
she smolders
2008-05-06
ch 1,
abuseI'd like to learn how to make my words feel as colourful and rich as your's does. The twist at the end was bittersweet - honey is sweet and cloying but the last line suggests oh so much more. Take care.
Tranquil Thorns
2008-05-06
ch 1,
abuseVery lovely.

I really like the French. It seems to give the poem an almost exotic feeling. That probably sounds very stupid, but I don't know any other way to word it. =P

Just one thing. For 'complied moments into scenes', did you mean 'compiled', or is that something I just didn't understand?

As always, wonderful work.

Keep writing! (:
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