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| Lachrymosa 2008-05-24 ch 1,  | abuseWow. Your poem means alot to me now, because I've just finished reading "The Unbearable Lightness of Being" - have you read it? A wonderful read. The ending ends so abruptly, I kept re-reading and leafing through the book to see if someone has torn the last few pages off. Anyhow, you've made me think alot about emptiness... I like how your last line - "staring back at nothing, forever." alludes to the nothingness of history. It makes everything more ephemeral. |
| Rose Valentine 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseVery nice poem ^-^ |
| Frore 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful! A refreshing look at this phrase! And very nice refrences to Larkin and Keats! |