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Lachrymosa
2008-05-24
ch 1,
abuseWow.
Your poem means alot to me now, because I've just finished reading "The Unbearable Lightness of Being" - have you read it? A wonderful read. The ending ends so abruptly, I kept re-reading and leafing through the book to see if someone has torn the last few pages off.
Anyhow, you've made me think alot about emptiness...

I like how your last line - "staring back at nothing, forever." alludes to the nothingness of history. It makes everything more ephemeral.
Rose Valentine
2008-05-03
ch 1,
abuseVery nice poem ^-^
Frore
2008-05-02
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful! A refreshing look at this phrase! And very nice refrences to Larkin and Keats!
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