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| Kitti 2008-07-22 ch 10, anon. | abuseomg i like this story...and my taste in stories is hard to find! Please keep the story going i would like to see how it ends. KiraixHaru. |
| Scrap Heap 2008-07-22 ch 2, anon. | abuseCool chappie! |
| bitter.ch0c0late 2008-07-14 ch 8,  | abuseyes yes we all need a litle romance! anyway, update soon i'm still reading ^^ and sorry for the very very VERY late reviews LOL well then, bye for now ^^ |
| bitter.ch0c0late 2008-07-14 ch 7, | abusestill, such pains!! LOL i can only wish them good luck with expenses yeah... i don't wanna have to deal with something like that now ^^ |
| bitter.ch0c0late 2008-07-14 ch 6, | abusejust one thing, -“I know recognize these Parasites anywhere,” - better if you remove the 'know' anyway, nice chapter it's okay to insert some seriousness every now and then after all, I don't expect associating with vampires to be that funny all the time it should certainly have its complications ^^ |
| bitter.ch0c0late 2008-07-14 ch 5, | abuseoh, so she does look like a boy! even her grandmother says so kinda like my sister... (oh she is so gonna kill me LOL) fun chapter ^^ |
| bitter.ch0c0late 2008-07-14 ch 4, | abuseoh those guys are such pains why do they keep insisting that she's a guy? poor Kirai... anyway, on with ch4! ^^ |
| Haru-chan 2008-06-19 ch 8, | abuseyayayayayay! love the update, and lipstick?? i almost died. can't wait til the next chap! |
| Geckos 2008-06-18 ch 8, | abuseO! Koolness!! Update soon plz. Love Shoujo, but supernatural is still awesome! |
| Haru-chan 2008-06-02 ch 7, | abusenice. sorry I haven't reviewed in so long, But i do like the story so far. keep up the good work. ^^ |
| yude tamago 2008-05-31 ch 7, anon. | abuseah i've been reading this since like it came out.. & yet, i've never reviewed. heh, sorry but i'm lazy. haha, i love this story. lovelovelove it! :3 ne, more people should review. shame, there's only 13... -_-; strange people.. aanywho, you're a great writer. KEEP ON WRITING! or i'll keel yoou. :D |
| Schmoogle 2008-05-29 ch 7, | abuseAw Iori is so cute! Oh and have you ever read Fruitsbasket? The three boys in your stories resemble (my friend next to me a.k.a. Death's Apprentice, is saying hello) the trio in that series. I think Iori is like Ayame, Yuuichi is Shigure, and Haru is Hatori! ^ ^ yay! |
| Hed in the Cloudz 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseI love Chiyo! She's only there for five paragraphs, but she's already hilarious and amazing. She's a real break from your other characters-- very matter of fact and happy. Quite fun to read! On the other hand, the fact that the main character is introduced as an orphan is rather nervous making. That's her only character trait so far, so it seems that you're verging on cliche. I'm sure that you'll steer away from that, but at the moment that's the unhappy impression I'm getting. --Yna, from the REview Marathon (see the link in my profile!) |
| Schmoogle 2008-05-23 ch 6, | abuseHmm...I enjoy the funny, but a little seriousness mixed in is a great combo! It's fine how it is in my opinion. Oh and do i detect a spark between Haru and Kirai?...i dunno ^ ^!! |
| Schmoogle 2008-05-23 ch 4, | abuseHa! I figured they were vampires...they are vampires right...maybe? Oh well. I love this story! ^ ^. Sorry if i'm reviewing too much by the way. I'm a very bored student at school right now _ _. |