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| no.peace.los.angeles 2008-07-12 ch 1, | abuseWow. It started off so happy and then it got REAL and raw and it was just heartwrenching. Love the last line. Wow. That's intense. Keep writing! :) |
| perdita 2008-05-04 ch 1, anon. | abusebaby it doesn't even need to be summer and my life is kind of like this sometimes this is amazingly intense and weather or not it's true it is wonderfully written and eerily relatable to |
| Saevitia 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseAhaha, I like this. Although dealing with mostly serious matters, the way it's written is very enjoyable, and even funny. And I think any girl can relate to this, which makes it all the better. Very well done. :) |