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Reviews For: What I Did This Summer:

no.peace.los.angeles
2008-07-12
ch 1,
abuseWow. It started off so happy and then it got REAL and raw and it was just heartwrenching. Love the last line. Wow. That's intense. Keep writing! :)
perdita
2008-05-04
ch 1, anon.
abusebaby it doesn't even need to be summer and my life is kind of like this sometimes
this is amazingly intense and weather or not it's true
it is wonderfully written and eerily relatable to
Saevitia
2008-05-03
ch 1,
abuseAhaha, I like this. Although dealing with mostly serious matters, the way it's written is very enjoyable, and even funny. And I think any girl can relate to this, which makes it all the better. Very well done. :)
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