thats so sad! no.. :'( well, i thought this story was pretty cute and its so sad that you're deleting it. But I know what you mean. that's the reason i have no stories on here i keep starting them and getting a few chapters in and im like wait what's my point in this story and then i just restart. but don't worry people will forgive you haha. anyway this was a good story and ill be sad to see it go, even though i just found it. author alerts, woo!

I think you're doing a good job so far. Your protagonist has quirks that make her, her own character rather than a generic mess. I think her friends are wonderfully fleshed out and serve as a nice contrast to her oddness.

Hahahahahaha, I love her attitude, its just brilliant, and love cookies too, who cant love them. Hehehehehe.
JM

Haha, her obsession with cookies is quite amusing. (;
The story is coming along nicely, I don't see anything that should be fixed. It gave me some chuckles, ;D

I have to admit; sandwich killing is fun. Really good chap. Noticed music and cellos... I play viola in our school orchestra... I'm blabbing again... update soon.

Interesting. Note to self: Story peaked interest. Note to author: good plotline and good grammar (a small group of writers have that trait (I am not in that group)). Hope you update soon.

P.S.:If you don't mind could you check out my stories? I am begging. But if you don't it's alright...

ANYWAY, hope you update soon and hope you get good reviews.

I actually laughed out loud when I read this chapter. "You blathering squirrel". The next time someone bugs me, I think I'll yell that at them. And I can totally relate to Alex. Cookie dough + vanilla Frosty= heaven. This story seems like it has a lot of potential. I look forward to the next chapter.

You are very welcome =)

Bwaahah your really good in writing humorous dialogue. Alex's replies were H-I-L-A-R-I-O-U-S. I will definetely remember them for the next time I'm in an argument. I'll be like, "You..you BLATHERING SQUIRELL!" lol.

And thanks for the cookie. I like cookies.

This is even better than the first one. Alex's "insults" were more than just funny, and I love the way you write the story. I can't wait to see another one.

The title of this story was original, and definitely caught my attention. Once I started reading, I was glad that I had gone poking around. This is a very original story, and very funny as well. I enjoyed reading it, and I'm looking forward to seeing more chapters. There were some very, very slight mistakes where a letter was missing in a word or whatever, but I only saw it once or twice and it hardly distracted me from the story. All in all, it was amazing!

Oy, Sir Cher-Cher!

I loves it so very much. Are you continuing it? You should. I think you told me if you were... but I can't remember.

ANYWAYS.

HI-HI!!

Lol what a funny first chapter!
I like the character Alex, You've played out her obsession well =]
Hope ya update soon

its good so far so update quickly!! :D

haha
this story is hilarious!
i love it!
update soon

Ahahah this was funny. I like cookies too,

As for constructive critism, I'm not really good at that type of thing :]

I could totally see her snapping her fingers in a Z-formation, though.