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| Mona Lisa Smile 2008-05-06 ch 1,  | abuseI definitely enjoyed reading this. I like how there were the little sides in italics, hitting some emotional cords. And your first little blurb made me want to jump right in and read with that little bit of humor. Otherwise, I really enjoyed reading this - very nice. Write on, please! |
| found.eventually 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseThis was good. Insanely good. The writing style is different from your usual, slightly more sentimental, perhaps? Meh. I don't know! But eitherway it's perfect. :) |
| misery sister 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is what I'm getting from Civil. He seems pretty solid, as in, he's honest, direct to the point, and he keeps his emotions to himself. Like, he seems pretty guarded. That's why it's so heartbreaking to read how much put down all these barries for this girl and she... died? Left him? Heartbreaking, but makes me want to read more. |
| Garand 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseYay for Japanese friends! One of my besties is a Japanese exchange student. I love this story so far, vague, but very captivating, I find myself longing for more, which is why I'm reviewing. 'Cause I definitely know I want more. Keep 'er going, and I'll definitely keep reading. |
| my own prince 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseThis is a definitely more serious turn in your writing - but I like it. It's nice to see that you have more sides in your writing. It was great, btw. I like all your descriptions. |