my fav line 'Hey dude, my girlfriend just dumped me for another girl, my heart is shattered to pieces, and I feel like crying. Man, do you think you could come over with a box of tissues?'. If you get what I mean. ha ha 1 i laughed like hell ;)
raally nd him desrve a kiss :P ;) great stry

really really great adorable and co. loved it!

Possibly one of the greatest things I've read.

You want me to flatter you? Well sorry, but, too bad for you, I'm going to say the truth. I love your story,and there's nothing I would change about it. It's pretty much perfect to me and I really think you should continue it. Your reviewer forever,

-Latinoprincess

This dragged up the most painful, horrible, bittersweet memories in my life. I love it and wish I hadn't read it. All that considered, it's one of my new favorites.

"I think I need to go home. My uh, my microwave is still on."

lmao xD great story!

"If you love two people at the same time, choose the second one, because if you really loved the first one you wouldn’t have fallen for the second" - Johnny Depp

This is so cute! and utterly perfect. I love that he's so real, and Rally is plain awesome.

:D

Now, if that wasn't cute and awesome... then I don't know what is! :D

love it!

I really like the whole uniqueness of the plot! :) Great job! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

Bubbly Girl

I liked this.

I liked the way they met. It was pretty darn original, that's for sure. I loved the heart analogy, with the lego pieces. Even more original and unique. The humor was also appreciated, as usual.

Despite being in guy's perspective, there /were/ still a /bit/ of girl-traces if you know what I mean. But this is probably inevitable as you can't fully immerse yourself into another gender. Other than the whole Winnie the Pooh mug (the cuteness comparison), I didn't really notice any glaring "I'M A GIRL WRITER," hints, which is pretty good. (I know he wasnt exactly the manliest, but, Piglet/Pooh cuteness comparison just seems a bit /far/. Maybe it's just me). I also spotted a minor error (I gritted her teeth), but nothing noticeable otherwise.

Sorry I can't really provide any more depth to another two-dimensional review. There's not much to say other than that it was really good.

Keep writing. :)

haha cute!

I loved it! I totally laughed at this: "I think I need to go home. My uh, my microwave is still on." and of course the "Rallygos" and how Cameron was all like "Oh God, she totally ruined Lego."

Aww, Rally is such a sweet girl!:D Love their chemistry.:DD

That was great! I really like the idea of the 'Rallygos'. :D So cute. And I think you pulled the guy-POV thing off really well, too. I love the part where he goes, "She likes me. She likes me. What the hell. She likes me!" :D Yep. Great story, great job!