Reviews for Forgotten Moments

half-sketched.staccatos 2008-05-03 ch 1,	konban wa Here's a tip: if you want single spacing instead of double spacing, go to the document and click edit. Then, backspace one line until its on the line above it. Now, instead of clicking ENTER to get it to the next line, hold SHIFT and then click ENTER. That way, it's single-spaced, not double. In case you wanted it. :) Also, I'm not one for rhyming -- I really dislike it. So I can't tell you I liked this poem very much for that reason. However, I do think - again - that you have a wonderful grasp on imagery. Zaijen -Shan-
MyWorldisBlack 2008-05-03 ch 1,	wow another amazing poem!
InkAngyl 2008-05-03 ch 1,	I love it. I especially like the last sentence... It's my favorite.