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Zack M.
2008-05-06
ch 1, anon.
abuse100 times better than I can write, great stuff "my train of thought has turned into a broken record" great great great line.
explosion of planes
2008-05-03
ch 1,
abusethe summery really pulled me in,
even if it's just one word.

this is powerful, the short-
kind of powerful. i love it, the
firt line--

my favorite.
just.because.lemonade.stand
2008-05-03
ch 1,
abusei like it. im not sure i get it. but i like it.

my train of thought has turned into a broken record

that line lots
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