that was so amazing!
even though i'm not huge on angst or sad stories i have to admit i loved this story and i adore your writing, seriously wow

I bet it was quite fun reading it aloud. But it's so sad. So sad.

*cries *

Omg. I've got tears coming down. That was so sad. >.

I like zombies, I like dead people, and I like this story.

The main character is so sweet and depressed. It's so cute in a messed up sort of way. I approve.

Aw I loved it! I'm such a sucker for the tragedy/angst pieces. I fail so miserably to write them myself so I hunt down other peoples work to satisfy my craving lol.

Why haven't I been here before? I thought for sure, you of all people, I'd profile-stalked. What the devil is wrong with me.

Anyhow, I vote lenghtening the one-shot! One-shots just seem like prompts to me- I feel like building to the settings. ^^

Awesome job though! I so enjoyed it even if it was sad.. Much loves!

Gorgeous.
Good gracious. I looked at your profile, because I stalk anyone who reviews a story of mine (no, I'm not odd) and I'm glad I did!
First one-shot ever that nearly had me in tears. Very, very good.

I must say, beautifully written. It's got a good solid story and doesn't require explinations like many stories written in similar form. overall, bravo. however, title is EXTREMELY misleading. "Cigarettes for Sunsets" would have been better. (or something to that effect.)


S.

Aw =[

An excellent piece. That's a very interesting last line as well - it makes it sound as if the other man is crying as well. I love it.