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| Error-Author 2008-08-14 ch 1, | abuseAw I loved it! I'm such a sucker for the tragedy/angst pieces. I fail so miserably to write them myself so I hunt down other peoples work to satisfy my craving lol. Why haven't I been here before? I thought for sure, you of all people, I'd profile-stalked. What the devil is wrong with me. Anyhow, I vote lenghtening the one-shot! One-shots just seem like prompts to me- I feel like building to the settings. ^^ Awesome job though! I so enjoyed it even if it was sad.. Much loves! |
| Carnivale 2008-06-29 ch 1, | abuseGorgeous. Good gracious. I looked at your profile, because I stalk anyone who reviews a story of mine (no, I'm not odd) and I'm glad I did! First one-shot ever that nearly had me in tears. Very, very good. |
| Suzo 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseI must say, beautifully written. It's got a good solid story and doesn't require explinations like many stories written in similar form. overall, bravo. however, title is EXTREMELY misleading. "Cigarettes for Sunsets" would have been better. (or something to that effect.) S. |
| CaFFy 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseAw =[ |
| eturne 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseAn excellent piece. That's a very interesting last line as well - it makes it sound as if the other man is crying as well. I love it. |