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| Miss Dagny Taggart 2008-05-09 ch 3,  | abuseHmm...You are an excellent writer, obviously. And it's very true what you said about needing to "just slow down and drink life in" - I agree completely. I am very curious to find out how the first two chapters tie in to this new one! Can't wait to read more :) |
| Miss Dagny Taggart 2008-05-04 ch 2, | abuseWow, this is getting good! All the gross details scared the crap out of me since I wasn't expecting that at all, haha. Everything has such a nice flow to it, and there isn't anything for me to criticize. My favorite sentence was : "Like a thread, verging on the moment it will tear, and her body will shatter". Anyway, keep writing this! I want to know what happens next :) |
| Miss Dagny Taggart 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is very deep! I had to read it twice before I really grasped everything. Just one thing, though - is the first sentence ("In this moment, I can see pieces of myself floating by") supposed to be some kind of title, or did you mean to say the same sentence twice? Anyway, I hope you are planning to continue this piece; it is very intriguing so far. :) |