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Horizon Aflame: 3rd book of Vivie's Curse
Kiwiman
12/1/09 . chapter 1
Sorry I took so long to review,
The first chapter has been very good, I noticed that you use a lot of speech to carry the story on
;)
Kiwiman 12/1/09 . chapter 1