Reviews for One Can Be Alone in a Crowd

BlackestOpal 2008-06-16 ch 1,	abuseReview game! Aw, that's really sad. Very good though. Almost everyone knows what it feels like to be alone. A lot of the the lines worked really well. "How many others poke fun at themselves Or laugh when other tease them Because they feel it is the only way to be noticed" Those lines are perfect, I loved them! The only concrit I can give is the heart references. You say "A heart longing for acceptance" and "a heart yearning for love" and "When inside their hearts are breaking". The heart reference gets a little tiring. Overall, great poem! Great idea and great way to describe it.
monique 2008-06-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseits really true its so good brilliant :)
Healing.x.Rain 2008-05-05 ch 1,	abuseThis is so true. You can always be alone, no matter how large the crowd! I loved the lines-- 'Though I do not understand the jokes, I laugh along anyway. Yet my laughter is simply a façade, For underneath this smiling exterior Lies a heart crying in pain.' I thought they were nice =) Anyway, keep up the writing! :D
Tranquil Thorns 2008-05-03 ch 1,	abuseThis is too true, especially the title. I really like the lines 'How many others poke fun at themselves... Because they feel it is the only way to be noticed'. Again, too true. Keep writing. (: