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| The Reverse Edge Blade 2008-05-04 ch 1,  | abuseI saw similarities between this poem and your other ones, in the words that you used. I think this disturbed a little, since it seemed sort of like you'd just been reproducing because of the use of the same words. Your descriptions of emotions, setup and way you express yourself is as wonderful as always, but I wished you'd not used the same lines as in other poems that you'd written. The Reverse Edge Blade |