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nuhkloom 2008-05-07 . chapter 1
This is something very natural and peaceful in it's one way. And it's talks about something very important for every people.
Heather Ashley 2008-05-06 . chapter 1
I loved this poem. You should see my poem "Feelings" because it's very similar. I know what you were going through when you wrote it. And I like the "cuz." Keep it!
The Reverse Edge Blade 2008-05-04 . chapter 1
I can understand this feeling. You expressed yourself well, and I liked that a poem with this type of message was in a haiku, and not longer. I liked the words you used, and how you expressed your emotions.
Keep at it and write more!
The Reverse Edge Blade
Lise Meitner 2008-05-03 . chapter 1
This is so cute! But also kind of sad. Keep up the great work :)
Tranquil Thorns 2008-05-03 . chapter 1
Nice haiku. (:

The only thing I'd advise is to change 'cuz' to ''cause'. Just a preference thing.
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